I have set on a journey since I was born
I wana make this trip one of the best
I wana go places, God has created for us
I wana do things, people just dreamt about
I wana make this journey of mine real
I don’t wana live in a fantasy world
I know my life won’t be enough
But I’ll steal as much beauty before I surrender
I wana fly far away with the lightness of bird
I wana dive in water with swiftness of fish
I wana climb mountains to touch the sky
I wana romance the nature all the while
Hurdles and obstacles will try to descend me
I will have to make choices among things
But I would walk on the unexplored path
And I know I would emerge out victorious
Following your heart will always lead to victory!
Thats the power of belief!
By: Nabila Zaidi on September 14, 2008
at 9:42 am
Happy Journey!!!!!
”I wana fly far away with the lightness of bird
I wana dive in water with swiftness of fish”- lovely!!!
By: Dyna on October 22, 2008
at 4:27 am
Poetry starts with an idea – the start is excellent! These themes never get old
Then is the choice of words/expressions – touching the sky is an expression too commonly used – there are seveal examples available on how the pros avoid these overused expressions and also on how they use this also in a refreshing new context.
My advice – read more! there is an opportunity of drastic improvement here
By: Ambcorp Amsay on March 27, 2009
at 7:55 pm